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dear diane by ~silver-35-oasis:iconsilver-35-oasis:



You seem so happy with where your life is right now, but tell me angel, are you really? Are you as happy as you were when our lips first met? Are you as happy as you were when we used to hold hands? Does he make you melt inside, or does he have your heart chained down? Does he truly make you happy, or are you avoiding the fact that you still miss me? When you lay in bed at night, who are you really thinking of? Does my face haunt your every dream? Can you swear that i never cross your mind? I know that it seems like forever ago, but you said that true love never dies. Remember when you said that what we had was true? I hope that you think of me every time you close your eyes, and when you call out to him, I want it to be my name that slips from your precious lips.
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*Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite: Mar 19, 2008, 1:03:06 PM
It's raw and true. And no matter how the words are written, you can sense the spite in your tone. Wonderful job.

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~StephanieNicole1002:iconStephanieNicole1002: Mar 21, 2008, 7:49:11 PM Mood: Love Dazed
i'm in love with you written work

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~silver-35-oasis:iconsilver-35-oasis: Mar 24, 2008, 7:36:52 PM
thanks, i love that you love my written work. haha

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-Joey

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~silver-35-oasis:iconsilver-35-oasis: Mar 24, 2008, 7:39:36 PM
thanks. maybe one day i'll be as great of a poet as you are. :blush:

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-Joey

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*Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite: Mar 24, 2008, 8:37:54 PM
lol You are a great poet. Everyone writes differently. This way works best for you and it's your own style. You take control of it

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:My conversations are short like commericals but more interesting and more random crap:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]