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sincerely yours by ~silver-35-oasis:iconsilver-35-oasis:



These are more than just words
so if you don't like what you see,
mop up the blood.
I don't need you to explain
how i could make this better,
so keep your criticism to yourself

This isn't for fortune and fame,
but to keep me from going crazy.
I'm not concerned about making
this pleasing to your eyes,
so if you want a happy ending,
write it yourself.

Every single word is poured out
from my broken heart,
so please forgive me if they seem
a little real.

I don't write fairy tales
so don't expect this to turn out
the way that you think it should.

These words are fragments of my life,
I can't write them in any other fashion.
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this was inspired by a lot of people that said my poetry was too "sad"... well, this was my response

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*Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite: Jan 22, 2008, 3:52:48 PM
wow... if YOUR poetry is too sad.. don't let them see my page! I love your writings. And they're suppose to be emotional. Who cares how sad when you're just expressing yourself. Wonderful job of telling them off... just write another one :D

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~silver-35-oasis:iconsilver-35-oasis: Jan 22, 2008, 4:52:26 PM
you better believe that i'm not letting people's "advice" affect me writing poetry. i mean, after all, this is how i bleed.....

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-Joey

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~emofaun:iconemofaun: Jan 22, 2008, 5:35:11 PM
:clap: That's the way. Tell me off! :D

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"This drawing is boring.....needs more blood."
~silver-35-oasis:iconsilver-35-oasis: Jan 24, 2008, 7:28:09 AM
yeah, apparently there are a few people that are artists on here that think they're my therapist.....

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-Joey

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~emofaun:iconemofaun: Jan 24, 2008, 7:32:55 AM
Sheesh. Art *is* therapy. They should get a life.

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"This drawing is boring.....needs more blood."
~StephanieNicole1002:iconStephanieNicole1002: Feb 26, 2008, 7:37:40 PM Mood: Thrilled
Can we say Edgar Allen Poe, that dude was dark but oh so cool

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~silver-35-oasis:iconsilver-35-oasis: Feb 26, 2008, 7:40:43 PM
:blush: thanks a lot. edgar a. poe is like....wow....thanks. haha. he's one of my huge inspirations. i'm speechless.

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-Joey

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